Thursday, May 03, 2007


Where have all the colors gone? I know that there are some left, but where are the treasured reds, purples, and yellows? Black and white can only get you so far. What would we be in this world without our colors?
Have you ever thought that those colors that we call forest green, cerulean blue, magenta, and chartreuse look different to eveyone? Red to me could look like orange to you.
What if having different colored eyes gave you a sharper sensitivity to seeing these supposed colors? Eyes are already one of the biggest things that sets apart humans from one another.
The annoying librarian whispered a threat on the school's roof just as the announcement was made.

"Now please stand for the Pledge of Allegiance."
The children shuffled to their feet unwillingly.
"I pledge allegiance to the flag..."
The words slowly faded out. They were left with silence.

Tuesday, May 01, 2007

Title Starters

"The Fires of Spring"

Every year, around the beginning of March, there is a strange phenomenon. Looking over towards the forest, you might be lucky enough to see one of these mystical creatures hover above the tree line for a few precious moments. They are like beings of purple and blue and green fire, yet they obviously don't burn

Friday, April 27, 2007

The clever school police officer tripped over the body in the broom closet right before the science fair.


Officer Cody Sutton stood at the bottom of the main staricase, picking his ear. He was watching the multitude of students run to their classes or their cars to skip those classes. Nasty little brats, he thought. At least twice a month he had to fill out an enormous pile of paperwork for arresting a kid, and more often than not, their parents would barge into his office threatening legal action. Damn dirty stupid little rich white bastards! he thought angrily again, or maybe he even muttered it, for a teacher slid him a sidelong glance that looked startled. The bell rang. Most of those dawlding students started to jog to the doors. It was funny to watch: the boys grabbed the tops of their pants and held them in place so they wouldn't fall any further down over their ass, as if they weren't far down enough, and the girls ran as fast as they could without lifting up thier feet while keeping their hair and jewelry perfect. Sutton shook his head at the tardies and walked off towards his office. Sitting there in handcuffs was one of those hardcore punk types, complete with chains on his ripped up Tripp pants and studded bracelets and belt, all thrown mismatched onto his body. Finishing this ensemble was a green and black mohawk. He looked up at Officer Sutton through eyes heavy with thick black eyeliner, and then looked down into his lap. Sutton thought to himself how lucky his parents were to have raised this fine young man, sitting here in handcuffs. His parents must be kicking themselves, asking where they went wrong.
"This one was smoking marijuana in the woods," said the other officer, Janeen Silvas. "He was trying to evade arrest. His parents are on their way."
"Wonderful. Just wonderful. You've already got his statment?"
"Yeah. Here it is," Officer Silvas tossed the statment onto Sutton's desk.
"It's blank."
"He didn't say anything except that he pleads the 5th."
Sutton sighed and sat down at his desk and searched for the release form for the parents amid foot-high piles of other forms and assorted papers.

Monday, April 23, 2007

I want to go to Prom

I want to go to Prom, and I want it to be the best event, other than graduation of course, of my senior life in high school.
I want to have the hottest date in the school and be the envy of every girl there.
I want to have the dress that flows down my body like the soft summer rain that will surely come after this glorious night is over.
I want to have jewelry that glimmers so brightly that I would dazzle even the most stubborn of critics.
I want to have perfect makeup so that you couldn’t tell that I’d spent years treating my face with prescription acne medicine, and for weeks before I had done my best to not get stressed so I wouldn’t have any breakouts.
I want to have a perfect hairstyle with my golden tresses falling out of an artfully loose up-do, curling down dangerously towards my neck.
I want to be voted Prom Queen, and not trip and fall on the steps up to the stage.
I want to have a small speech prepared, but there would be nothing that I could say that would show everyone how happy I was.
I want to be able to smile and laugh on stage instead of tears forming in my eyes like usual.
I want to be able to dance gracefully at the beginning instead of me tripping over my own clumsy feet and everyone in the crowd quietly giggling.
I want to leave Prom feeling happy because I had so much fun doing something school-oriented that everybody cares about.
I want to go to some of the greatest parties, and I want to crash some of those great parties.
I want to ride in a limo, something that I've never done before, and not have everyone argue over the type of music played.
I want my mom to say, "Go and have fun. I'll see you tomorrow."
I want to stay out all night in a hotel at a huge party that I helped throw, and then I almost want to wake up with a huge hangover, because I'll know that I had a fun night.
I want to see so many people that I’ve wanted to party with for months all at one big party with lots of tequila and vodka and whiskey and marijuana and beer.
I want to wake up the next morning happy, not regretting anything.
I want my prom date to call me the next day saying that he had so much fun with me last night and he wants to hang out again.
I want to go out with my friends to some obscure coffee house and them insist on my wearing my tiara and ribbon and fawning over me until my face is red from embarrassment.
I want people at school to notice me in the halls at school, and whisper to their friends when I walk by, “Look! There she is! She was voted Prom Queen!”
I want to look confused about why everyone is finally noticing me after 3 years of walking tall through these halls.

Friday, April 13, 2007

Now, when I hear his name, it makes me smile. It makes my heart soar. hated him for so long, only for the fact that he wouldn't talk to me. I have this thing; I can't be ignored by somebody who I have an interest in. It drives me to insanity. Nobody can understand the depth of my feelings, except maybe him. I find that my attraction to him is not totally based in fantasy, because I know he has similar feeling, even if they aren't as strong. However, I find that my desires are a bit more carnal this time. I find myself looking at his back, admiring the strong shoulders and powerful torso. I can almost feel my own eyes blazing with fire.

Friday, April 06, 2007

Prom (Draft 1)

I want to go to Prom, and I want it to be the best event, other than graduation of course, of my senior life in high school.
I want to have the hottest date in the school and be the envy of every girl there.
I want to have the perfect dress, the perfect jewelry, the perfect makeup, the perfect hairstyle.
I want to be Prom Queen, I want to walk up on the stage after being voted Prom Queen, and I want my dress to shimmer and show me off at my best.
I want to go to some of the greatest parties, and I want to crash some of those great parties.
I want to ride in a limo, something that I've never done before.
I want everything to work out like it usually does.
I want my mom to say, "Go and have fun. I'll see you tomorrow."
I want to stay out all night in a hotel at a huge party that I helped throw.
I almost want to wake up with a huge hangover, because then I'll know that I had a fun night.
I want to wake up the next morning happy, not regreting anything.

Thursday, April 05, 2007

I want to wake up happy for once. I want to wake up warm, not cold and shivering. I want to simply step into the bathroom and walk out clean. I want my clothes to wash and dry themselves, and as soon as the thought of what I want to wear comes into my head, I want my clothes to dress themselves on me. I want to walk downstairs and have a small breakfast waiting for me instead of two huge sandwiches made for me in the microwave. I want my brother to be ready in the morning, instead of me having to yell at him 4 or 5 times for him to get out of bed. I want my van to be full of gasoline instead of me having to leave the house 10 minutes earlier to fill it up. I want the street through the neighborhood to be clear.

Wednesday, March 28, 2007

The King's Secret Matter

“No man shall be my master, least of all the fattest and most corrupt of God’s representatives!” Henry roared, pounding his fist on the rickety table for effect. “He has no say in the politics of England!”
I didn’t even flinch; these were the words I had wanted to hear for two years, two long, cold, uncertain years. Ever since I had played this mighty king of England for a lovesick fool, nothing could move forward in my quest for the throne unless Henry rid himself of his current wife, Catherine of Aragon. However, Catherine had the whole power of the European monarchies behind her, as well as the Pope and the Catholic Church.
“Yes Henry, he’s not your master. Only the holy Lord in heaven is. Why should we have to depend upon a foreign leader for access into paradise?”
“We should not. Damnit Anne, I will have a son to follow me!”
I stood there, silent. I knew deep down, if I didn’t get a son from Henry, he would turn against me as he was now against Catherine. I knew deep down that Catherine had done nothing wrong, but only that Henry had tired of her. This lustful king was all about the chase; when it was over, he immediately sought another. I had to keep him coming forward, and yet hold him off, and I had to do it without him realizing that I was playing him for all it was worth: the crown of the Queen of England.
Henry dropped down into a chair, as though exhausted. I went and knelt at his feet, and looked into his eyes. He disliked a direct stare, and his eyes clouded over with more anger.
“Henry, my love, I swear to you on my life that God must not approve of your living in sin with Catherine. I can give you a son.”
“Anne, my darling, marry me.”
I could not believe my ears. This is what I had been waiting for. My position was assured now.
“Oh Henry, of course. I would want nothing more.”

Henry set out to break with the Church. I helped him along by supporting the purging of Catholicism and making a pure religion. Once the Pope was no longer in power in England, the clergy learned that while the Holy Father of the Roman Catholic Church may have been their spiritual leader, their king was a good deal more powerful and closer to home. Henry emptied the coffers of the churches and put them into the falling Treasury. Along the way, many opposed the divorce, and several of Henry’s advisors resigned their post in silent protest. Henry felt he was forced to execute one of his greatest friends, Thomas More, for defending his wife.
I believed that Henry did at one point actually love Catherine, but that love was gone now and replaced by the burning desire he now felt for me.
I was fed up by turns from all of the opposition Henry and I were facing. His greatest advisor, Cardinal Wolsey, was trying everything he could to bring about a speedy end to the divorce, but the Pope in Rome was under the threat of the Emperor Charles V of Spain, Catherine’s nephew. While Charles held the reigns of Europe in his grasp, the Pope couldn’t run the risk of granting Henry’s request without endangering his own livelihood. So, for the time being, Henry and I were unable to move forward.
Wolsey, however, wasn’t exactly keen on the idea that Henry marry me; he wanted an alliance with the French, intending that Henry marry the Princess RenĂ©e, the daughter of Louis XII, the previous king of France.
I guess it was my outbursts of temper that really made me, and everyone else for that matter, realize that I had such complete control over the king. When I learned the Catherine still sewed Henry’s shirts, I was furious.
“Anne, she has sewed my shirts since she came to live with me. I had no idea that it would offend you.”
“Of course it would offend me! She still treats you as if she were the mistress of your household, and you allow her to do so. By God Henry, you have hurt me with this!” I shouted.
“Anne…”
“No! Obviously, she is still considered your wife by all. I shall leave and make my home at Hever.”
“Anne, my love, don’t say such things. I shall tell her that I don’t wish her to sew them anymore.”
“I bid you a good day, Your Majesty,” and with that, I curtseyed low and backed from his privy chamber. I fled to my own apartments. The next day when I awoke, there was a splendid ruby necklace and matching bracelet lying on my dressing table with a loving note of apology.
What power I had over the king! If only I had seen how far my fall would be from this great rise.

Later on in the year, the king came to me with accusations of my having had an affair 4 years previous. The man in question was Henry Percy, the heir to the Earl of Northumberland. He had been a page to Wolsey, and I had been a lady of Catherine's court. Percy and I had wanted to be together, and with my sister and father's fortunes rising, I thought that we could have anything. There was only the matter of convincing his family. Alas, it was not to be. On the king's order, Wolsey separated us and sent Henry off to the North to his father's choice of a bride. I too was banished down to our family home of Hever in Kent. Now, the king was bringing us this incident in my past, because someone had set is curiosity aflame. It was essential that I knew whom.
"Who told you this slander?"
"Anne, my love, you have already assured me that it was nothing. I saw to it that it went no further than nothing." Henry pleaded with me, trying to avoid having to tell me the name.
"Then I shall leave. As I am no longer trusted, I am no longer bound to your service." I was only testing him, although my anger was real enough.
"No! Anne, I only needed to hear you reassure me that it was nothing. I know that you are a shinning perfection of womanhood and purity. If he had been any other, I would have hit him around the head and sent him from my court."
"Oh, so this was a trusted friend? Henry, tell me who."
He paused for a long time, and finally said in a low voice, "Suffolk."
So, it was that little rat of a friend, Charles Brandon, the Duke of Suffolk. He had married Henry's sister Mary, and both were close to him.

Thursday, March 08, 2007

Historical Fiction

"No man shall be my master, least of all the fattest and most corrupt of God's representatives!" Henry roared, punding his fist on the table for effect. "He has no say in the politics of England!"
Anne didn't even flinch; these were the words she had wanted to hear for two years, two long, cold, uncertain years. Ever since she had played this mighty king of England for a lovesick fool, nothing could move forward in her quest for the throne unless Henry rid himself of his current wife, Catherine of Aragon. However, Catherine had the whole power of Europe behind her, as well as the power of the Pope and the Catholic Church.
"Yes Henry, he's not your master. Only the holy Lord in heaven is. Why should we have to depend upon a foreign leader for access into paradise?"
"We should not. Damnit Anne, I will have a son to follow me!"

Friday, January 26, 2007

Movie Response

1. What are some of the ways that the writer (Charlie Kaufman) created character in the movie? In other words how does the audience get to know who Joel and Clementine are? Give examples of direct characterization (things that are actually stated about the characters) and indirect characterization (clues given to the audience about what type of people they are.)
He pretty much starts off with following their paths. Just by seeing their lives, you begin to understand how they live. Clementine is very atrtsy-fartsy and doesn't seem to care what anyone else thinks. He attitude towards everyone and her constantly changing hair gives clues to her character as a person. Joel, however, is a sort-of closed-up person; he wears dark clothing, and seems dull. His voice-overs on his journal in the begining of the movie reveal the constant regualrity of his life. We can see that they both have some internal conflict, but it's not shown to each other much.

2. In your short screenplay (10 minutes max), which of these techniques can you use, and which won't work?
I can use the visual aspect of character development, and a little dialouge, but I can't go into minute detail with everyone.

3. What are some of the ways that the writer (Charlie Kaufman) handled the plot? Especially focus on exposition. How does he let us know who the characters are and what is happening? How does he handle conflict? How does he handle climax?
The exposition use in the film was masterful. Just by letting the characters go about their daily lives, with little side shots of another moment that matters, Charlie Kaufman developed his plot well.

4. What, in a short film, are the limitations that you have to deal with with plot? Consider what you read in the "Dramatic Exercise" assignment.
The main limitation is, obviously, time. Other limitations include improper development of the theme, and ultimately, the actul storyline. I don't really know; I'm just puling this out of the air.

Friday, January 12, 2007

Dramatic Exercise

Writing the Short Film
What is the rule of thumb for the length of a movie/number of pages of the script?
Most movies are about 120 pages long, each page equaling one minute of the movie, to equal 2 hours (approx).
What are the major ways that short films differ from feature films?
Other than the length differences, short films tend to not have the time to develop an elaborate plaot, so it mostly sticks to telling a situation as opposed to a long story.

Conceiving Our Story
What is the "Dramatic Moment" in the film?
When Papa says he drinks "because of Mama."
What are the major conflicts/questions in "Because of Mama?"
Parents vs. Child, Husband vs. Wife. Why does Papa drink?

Determining the Structure
The writer claims that for a short screenplay "a good story needs to have an archetypal storyline and a big idea." Why does he state this, and do you agree?
Because the story needs some form to follow. I agree to a point, but only because every type of achetype has been done and re done and re-redone so many times that it's hard to put a new spin or twist on it.
Read the Step Outline.
So read.

Discovering/Crafting Images
What is exposition, and how did the writers decide to handle it in the example they give?
Exposition is the way of telling the audience certain characteristics that can't be told through dialouge. They told it through the scene of the him playing the cello dressed in his hockey gear.

Writing Scenes. Beginnings, Middles, Ends/Tips for Writing Engaging Scenes
Read carefully - you will be writing scenes.

What are the three things you read in these sections that you found the most interesting/helpful and that you will implement?
1) A good scene reveals something new, 2) Having a resolved scene at the end even after the climax, and 3) keeping the begining scenes short and to the point.